Warm-Up Which expository writing strategy would best organize the following information? Why?

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1 Warm-Up Which expository writing strategy would best organize the following information? Why? Hamurabi s Code is a well-preserved Babylonian law code of ancient Mesopotamia, dating back to about 1754 BC. It is one of the oldest deciphered writings of significant length in the world.

2 Investigation Before Explanation (IBE) Organize the essay in a logical manner. Be prepared to justify your choices.

3 IBE follow up questions Why did you choose to organize the strips the way you did? How does structure play a role in expository writing?

4 Expository Essay Overview Introduction Hook Thesis Transition Sentence Body Topic Sentence cause/effect, compare/contrast, classification Details context, quotation, explanation summary statement Conclusion Restate Thesis Connection (self, world)

5 Topic: Expository Essay Introduction Learning Targets I can introduce a thesis statement. I can use strategies such as compare and contrast, cause and effect, classification, and definition to convey my ideas.

6 Where should we begin? Prompt: What geological processes contribute to shaping Earth s surface? geological: the study of Earth and the rocks that compose it contribute: play a part in or bring about

7 Introduction overview An expository introduction paragraph has 3 parts: hook thesis statement transition sentence

8 Example of full introductory paragraph Sample Topic: Describe the composition of the Earth. The Earth in some ways is like a giant jawbreaker. It is composed of several layers that make up its entirety. When the outer layers are broken away, each layer begins to show its unique make up. The Earth is composed of many layers. Through classification, the composition of the Earth can be easily identified and explained.

9 Expository Introduction What is an it grabs the reader and reels him/her in essay hook? CFU: What is the main purpose of the hook? a few interesting sentences that capture reader s attention keeps the readers reading and wanting more info

10 Expository Introduction Where does the hook go? in the introduction it appears in the very first sentences of the introduction The Earth in some ways is like a giant jawbreaker. It is composed of several layers that make up its entirety. When the outer layers are broken away, each layer begins to show its unique make up. The Earth is composed of many layers. Through classification, the composition of the Earth can be easily identified and explained.

11 Expository Introduction How do I create a hook? quotations from people, articles, books, etc. poems song lyrics statistics keeping track of information using numbers Always make sure your hook supports the prompt

12 Whiteboards: What method is being used to create the hook? Throw your hands up for the layers of the Earth/Throw em up for what s below the surface/throw your hands up and let s discuss/the inner core, outer core, mantle and crust. This rap by RRR introduces the main layers of the Earth. Possible Hooks: quotation poem song lyrics statistics

13 Whiteboards: What method is being used to create the hook? "[The mantle] is the engine that drives how our planet works and why we have earthquakes and volcanoes and continents. This statement from geologist, Damon Teagle shows how important the Earth s layers are to the structure of our planet. Possible Hooks: quotation poem song lyrics statistics

14 Whiteboards: What method is being used to create the hook? The Earth s crust is believed to be about 10 miles of rock and loose material. This is the layer of Earth on which all living things exist and proof of the importance of these layers. Possible Hooks: quotation poem song lyrics statistics

15 Expository Introduction Nonexamples of a hook I am going to write about... My essay is about... I am going to tell you...

16 Expository Introduction Let s practice! With your group, collaborate and create a hook for your introductory paragraph. Remember to pay attention to the prompt & make sure to reel the reader in.

17 Expository Introduction What is a thesis statement? CFU: What is the main purpose of the thesis statement? a statement that sets up the main focus of your whole essay How do I create it? restate the prompt as a declarative statement Where does it go? after the hook

18 Thesis Statement Location Sample Prompt: Describe the composition of the Earth. The Earth in some ways is like a giant jawbreaker. It is composed of several layers that make up its entirety. When the outer layers are broken away, each layer begins to show its unique make up. The Earth is composed of many layers. Through classification, the composition of the Earth can be easily identified and explained.

19 Thesis Examples (and non-examples) Examples: Examples: -The Earth is composed of many layers. -This essay is about the Earth s layers. -Temperature and density are reasons for the Earth s core to separate into layers. -Do you know how the Earth s core is layered? -The molten inner core of the Earth allows movement in the layers above it. -I think the Earth is layered like a cake. -The Earth s layers are layered. Sample Prompt: Describe the composition of the Earth.

20 Expository Introduction Let s practice! With your group, collaborate and create a thesis statement for your introductory paragraph. Remember to pay attention to the prompt.

21 Expository Introduction a sentence that moves you into What is a your first body paragraph transition sentence? highlights the writing strategy you will use & connects to the prompt Where does it go? follows the thesis statement

22 Transition sentence Location The Earth in some ways is like a giant jawbreaker. It is composed of several layers that make up its entirety. When the outer layers are broken away, each layer begins to show its unique make up. The Earth is composed of many layers. Through classification, the composition of the Earth can be easily identified and explained.

23 Expository Introduction Let s practice! With your group, collaborate and create a transition sentence for your introductory paragraph. Remember to choose a writing strategy & connect to the prompt.

24 Expository Introduction LESSON IMPORTANCE Thesis statements help to organize and introduce academic writing around a central idea. The thesis statement is the writing road map that lets you know what direction the writing will take (tells what texts will be about when reading). Makes people interested in your writing and helps people understand you and your thoughts.

Cupcake Geology adapted by Jess Krim from various sources

Cupcake Geology adapted by Jess Krim from various sources Content Background (What the teacher should know) There are types of rock sedimentary, igneous, metamorphic. Geologists find out about the earth